Wednesday, November 4, 2009

HEAVEN By Ashleigh C.

I was going through papers in her graded work folder I came across a story Ashleigh wrote at school. I usually quickly skim through the papers and sign the folder so we can be on our way. This morning I was doing the same thing as I do every Wednesday morning but this paper caught my attention (Holy Spirit). In scribbled letters I read the title "HEVEN". Her spelling is a work in progress but I couldn’t help but smile. I was running a little late but thought that this story deserved the time to be read. I have fixed the spelling but have left the title as is.

"HEVEN"
When I visit Heaven I will see a lot of people, my grandpa, my granddad, my aunt and Michael Jackson. I saw Jesus and he said hi child what is your name? I said Ashleigh. Jesus gave me 10 packets of candy and 5 packets of gum, I said thank you Jesus for the gum and the candy. Everybody was saying good day madam, I said thank you good men. It smells like strawberries, caramel and coconuts. The houses were all 500 stories, pink and blue and had 20 swimming pools. They had 900,000,000 TV’s and 200,000,000,000 channels. There is a light breeze in the morning. At lunch we ate steak, hotdogs and hamburgers. It was so fun in heaven.

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